Not done with it yet
tell me what u think so far and in the first three lines if i should change anything or whatnot. Can you help me think of a title? won't be too much longer i don't think..
With boiling blood
With a heart full of rage
I reach for a knife
Blood curling screams peirce the night air
Your cries for help will never be heard
The pain you caused me
With blood you shall pay
To Hell you cast me
Into Hell shall you burn
