I'm writing a sonnet for my English class and i'm not sure what to name it.
This is my sonnet:
In the dark, wet street, I sit in a heap
On the cold ground, I'm hit with a sharp pain
I wish I could just fall into deep sleep
Instead of my memories filled with vain
That I remember and still seem to creep
In the back of my mind, which I'll detain
But for now in the alley I will weep
Then I see him, as he walks through the rain
Our eyes meet and the tension becomes so deep
Then I emerge, the the dream hopefully slain
Because that nightmare had been strangely steep
I knew that man and that i could explain
Who he was, i new that he was my fate
Here to state my life was up for debate
Thank you for feedback. I really appreciate it. And for the line "Our eyes meet and the tension becomes so deep" I guess i can make it "Our eyes meet and the tension becomes deep". I will get back to you when i finally choose a title.
This is my sonnet:
In the dark, wet street, I sit in a heap
On the cold ground, I'm hit with a sharp pain
I wish I could just fall into deep sleep
Instead of my memories filled with vain
That I remember and still seem to creep
In the back of my mind, which I'll detain
But for now in the alley I will weep
Then I see him, as he walks through the rain
Our eyes meet and the tension becomes so deep
Then I emerge, the the dream hopefully slain
Because that nightmare had been strangely steep
I knew that man and that i could explain
Who he was, i new that he was my fate
Here to state my life was up for debate
Thank you for feedback. I really appreciate it. And for the line "Our eyes meet and the tension becomes so deep" I guess i can make it "Our eyes meet and the tension becomes deep". I will get back to you when i finally choose a title.