What is your opinion on this song I wrote?

Chanel E

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Every rose you give to me that red turns black again
And I don't need a guy who just pretends
Look through my eyes
You won't see me smile
Would look at me now
My life has turned upside down
I can't make things turn around

Chorus
But I love it when its cold out
You put your arms around me
Oh I, Love it when you do that to me
But everywhere I go now you just can't hear me say
Oh I, I really can't believe
Oh I, I fell in love again

Well you know I can't fall in love again
It's just to much pain
And I'm trying to stay away
I don't need those days
Why can't I just be myself
I don't need you
And I don't need nobody else
That's just how I felt

Chorus

When I wake up this morning
Tell that I will have to see your face
When the rain starts a pourin'
Will you be there
With loving care you said you had for me
Or will it disappear just all of a sudden
I won't know
But will you be there

Chorus 2x
 
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