What is your opinion on my poem?

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i worked really hard on this poem, so i hope u like it! dont be afraid to criticize, i just want to reach its full potential.*

alone in the world


i reach for you
you run away,
i wish that you could always stay

i reach for you
your already gone
don't you know what i've forgone

I reach for you
you run faster still
my life from here just goes downhill

I reach for you
you seem scared now
I just don't see why or how!

I reach for you
and you reach back
i almost have a heart attack!

and then i looked at your hand, and then i realized you were holding something. I was like DUDE!! WHAT ARE YOU HOLDING!?!? and then he was like ITS A RESTRAINING ORDER! YOU HAVE TEN SECONDS TO RUN OR IM CALLING THE COPS!!!

I ran away from you.

*this is not a serious poem hope you like it anyway:)
 
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