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Sudden
by Victoria Tarrani
0910.03
that moment
intense romantic connection
may last
the time it takes
for a glance
a chat
haunting
suddenly it
flares to mind
perhaps
years between
memories
time is not
the vindicator
of depth
it is the equivocator
of life
love
possibilities
moments
Please critique the poem; it is a first draft.
by Victoria Tarrani
0910.03
that moment
intense romantic connection
may last
the time it takes
for a glance
a chat
haunting
suddenly it
flares to mind
perhaps
years between
memories
time is not
the vindicator
of depth
it is the equivocator
of life
love
possibilities
moments
Please critique the poem; it is a first draft.