What is your opinion of my poem?

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fire_campbell

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No interruption
No bright lights
No tunnels
No turning back

Upon exiting, I noticed something vague
An intriguing, provocative impression from within
A climactic vista saturated with clarity

All was explained by coincidence in this place
Thought cocoons itself before reemerging as awareness
Time collapses into a single repeating instance

The promise of waking arbitrary dissipates
Familiar sensations emerge and evaporate simultaneously
Potential becomes the only visible image

Nothing more


TY
 
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