What is your opinion of my newest poem - HUMMINGBIRD?

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Step by step, I walk this path
In the brisk wind of September
The autumn leaves fall from the trees
To this day my eyes remember

In another life, I walked this trail
With my Grandpop, hand in hand
My head barely cleared the grass
As we walked this barren land

We marched at least a thousand miles
On that crisp morning in spring
The dew dripped from the leaves of grass
As the birds began to sing

I tugged his arm and said, "Look!"
"Look that bird, it hums!"
Now I know those hummingbirds
But I did not when I was young

My Grandpop paused and said "we're here"
As a smile consumed his face
For me, even the present
Is not as vivid as this place

I remember it like yesterday
This vibrant, childish dream
I looked into his soft blue eyes
As knelt beside the stream

He reached his hand into his pack
And revealed a tender tree
Accompanied by a yellow spade
He gave the pair to me

Years later I walk, searching
For this long forgotten place
Where we planted a seed of hope
That shaped the wrinkles on my face

An omen soars just past my ear
And up the final ridge
The hum connects the past and present
A buzz, a bird, a bridge

I expect to find a single tree
But my tree is not alone
A forest hugs the riverbed
Oh how the trees have grown



The effects of my grandpas Alzheimers just recently became severe. I wrote this looking back to the past and also to the future. I'm twenty but i'm writing about the two extremes of my life. Opinions are appreciated.
 
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