what is your honest opinions on this poem i wrote?

Jen

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Fears


Eating at every fiber of your being.

It's relentless pursuit of pure evil seems unstoppable.

Your nightmares it feeds on growing stronger with each one.

Feeling your soul, heart and mind betray you.

Each face you see bringing more doubt to your life.

Not knowing who to trust or who not to trust.


Your eyes showing demons in each angel face you happen upon.

Feeling universes closing in on your tears.

Gripping to the light you know to be out beyond the dark

cold brutal night.

Enemies wearing masks of friends.

Fooling your sight with demonic masquerades.

Dancing into your life celebrating

all your paranormal beliefs.

Tightening your lungs, wrenching your gut into a knot,

dripping your blood for all to feast upon.

Fears....... ..... .....

( thanks for your time)
 
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