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Mermaid Girl
Guest
Ok, so I know that there are so many people out there who want to write a novel, but, then there are the people who have started 15,000 stories (that may be an understatement) and can't finish the book cause they get bored of it. There are very few of these people in this world. I am one of them. (Seriously, I could make a 400 page book of stories I never finished cause I got bored with them.) I have been inspired to write a new book after finishing the whole series of Twilight books. The thing is, I can't come up with any good ideas. There is one I am writing now that may (very unlikely) be successful. Let me tell you about it so you know about my writing character:
A girl named Sam finds a hidden trail that leads to a ghost town. In school, she has a BFFL named Taylor (who is basically Jacob from Twilight), and another BFFL named Emily (or Amelia, I can't decide). When Sam finds the hidden trail, it leads her to a deserted village. . yes, she will be a character that is just there so that Sam has a friend in the book). She goes into one of the houses and discovers a boy named Daniel and his dog who still live there in a deserted house. (This boy is only a little tiny bit like edward.) Sam falls in love with him and Taylor is jealous, and bla bla bla. Then, something is going to happen so that Daniel will have to leave, or the village is going to disappear forever. Sam needs to save him (or the village) and his dog. But there is only one person who can help. Taylor. He doesn't want to though because he hates Daniel. He comes back in the end in her real time of need and saves them both. (This book may become a series.) So, I would like you to tell me how I could improve my story. PLEASE, I want ALL of your ideas. Even the totally CRAZY ones!!!! If you guys help me and I finish what is going to be over an 100 page book at least, I promise to put you in my acknowledgments area in the book!!! Oh yeah, and if you have something mean to say, PLEASE DON'T SAY IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! For those of you who help me to improve my story or give me ideas for it, you already have a spot reserved in heaven for you and an authors gratitude (that is worth a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!). Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A girl named Sam finds a hidden trail that leads to a ghost town. In school, she has a BFFL named Taylor (who is basically Jacob from Twilight), and another BFFL named Emily (or Amelia, I can't decide). When Sam finds the hidden trail, it leads her to a deserted village. . yes, she will be a character that is just there so that Sam has a friend in the book). She goes into one of the houses and discovers a boy named Daniel and his dog who still live there in a deserted house. (This boy is only a little tiny bit like edward.) Sam falls in love with him and Taylor is jealous, and bla bla bla. Then, something is going to happen so that Daniel will have to leave, or the village is going to disappear forever. Sam needs to save him (or the village) and his dog. But there is only one person who can help. Taylor. He doesn't want to though because he hates Daniel. He comes back in the end in her real time of need and saves them both. (This book may become a series.) So, I would like you to tell me how I could improve my story. PLEASE, I want ALL of your ideas. Even the totally CRAZY ones!!!! If you guys help me and I finish what is going to be over an 100 page book at least, I promise to put you in my acknowledgments area in the book!!! Oh yeah, and if you have something mean to say, PLEASE DON'T SAY IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! For those of you who help me to improve my story or give me ideas for it, you already have a spot reserved in heaven for you and an authors gratitude (that is worth a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!). Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!