What infinite madness would bring this poem to the surface? please critique this

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proposed sonnet? What infinite madness has come over me?
My senses are reeling, my mind out to lunch
Unfettered partake of this trite liberty
As I bite into this dark chocolate crispy crunch

It settles inside of my mouth where it’s melting
The crunches give texture that bring to me delight
What subtle recall does it bring in retelling?
I won’t give it up my dear without a great fight

What infinite madness imbedded in my brain
What flames were aroused with no way to extinguish?
Perhaps the pure desire to pen this sad refrain
In hopes that someone who reads it will distinguish

The difficulty with the madness in the brain
When approached and proffered to those thought to be sane
 
Thats really good and real it makes me feel like that crispy bar is in front of me
 
"As I bite into this dark chocolate crispy crunch"...

Crunchy..................
munchy....................
chocolatey..................
...
IT'S COCOA PUFFS!!!
 
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