What do you think of..?

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What do you think of the first chapter of my novel? Its about a boy who loses his best friend in a freak car accident. It also touches on his mother's death and his father's battle with alcohol addiction. Basically, I'd like you to rate it give me your thoughts and because its untitled, think of an original title for what you have read so far.

http://www.urbis.com/media/view/112654/untitled-chapt-1

taken from

http://www.urbis.com/indywalsh
 
How about these titles:

Loss of a friend

Coping with a death

Death and turmoil

What will I do alone again

Catastrophe in life
 
It seems like the idea is overused, but with some creative details you could make it work.A good title would be Life.
 
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