What do you think of this????????

[Lii]

i wrote it myslef and i want you to tell me what you think... please... pretty please...

i am looking at the clock
but i am not seeing the time
i feel tears burning down my cheeks
but i am not sad

I don't know
who i am
or what i am
what am i doing here

i am writing down worrds
that make no sense
i am singing a song
without a tune

i don't know
who i am
or what i am
why am i here at all
my mind is somewhere else
where the sky is blue
and the grass is emerald green
and the sun warming my skin

when i open my eyes
reality washes over me
i am still here
in the greyest world of all

i don't know
who i am
or what i am
all i know is that i cant stop dreaming...