Hey :}
I'm creating a, kind of demonic race for my novel, and the appearance has been troubling for me. Like, two weeks ago I asked for suggestions here and this is the result on how the race should look. Can I get your opinion on it?
Btw it's a fictional race, meant to be from another realm. They are called the Vahlbrien. The name's still being decided but I kind of liked that.
And, here's the appearance.
Frame: Human like.
Skin: Dark silvery grey, or fiery white.
Hair: Midnight black. Amber yellow. Fire red. Sea blue. Lime aquatic green. Metalic silver. Illuminescent white.
Normally long in length, shoulder length and longer.
Eyes: Maroon red. Ruby red. Golden yellow. Amber. Aquamarine. Teal. Lime.
The whole iris is slitted vertically. Pupil is small.
Ears: Thin/ flat against their heads.
Teeth: Silver and sharp, thinner then a humans and more like razor blades.
Nails: Sharp enough to slice through skin like butter.
Other: Horns matching the color of their skin. Thin. Start out fuzzy but becomes firmer as they grow older. How they grow and curve depends on their bloodline. Some stick straight up, while some curl downwards in a tight spiral. It varys.
A thick, muscular prehensile tail. Gets thinner as it goes out to the tip.
Markings: Have ancient tribal markings. As they grow older the patterns change with age.
Have a mottled skin tone. The patterns are made by the blood of the parents. All are similar to their bloodlines.
Humans turned into vahlbrien do not have markings. They have a branded symbol on their upper arm.
((Their markings vary as well. Representing what familys they are apart of. How high up on the scale they are.))
Their appearances vary like us humans. No two look exactly the same, unless of course identical twins.
I was thinking that their internal structure was different too, but I wasn't sure what. I was thinking maybe they have the solid layer of tissue or bone on the front of their body, like how the Reapers in the one Blade movie had.
Here's more on the world if you want. The world is similar to that of Sheogorath's mania and dementia, from the elder scrolls game Oblivion. The eternal dark and twistedness of dementia, and the vived, colorfulness of mania. Also is somewhat similar to the Twilight Realm in the LoZ game, Twilight Princess. If you know either that is. The worlds not advanced like ours, but it's not completly medieval either. It has palaces, machinary and it's own forms of technology. Goes by a caste system too.
So, what do you think? Anything you think that I should change or add? Use instead?
Anything you have to say about it can help.
Thanks :}
I'm creating a, kind of demonic race for my novel, and the appearance has been troubling for me. Like, two weeks ago I asked for suggestions here and this is the result on how the race should look. Can I get your opinion on it?
Btw it's a fictional race, meant to be from another realm. They are called the Vahlbrien. The name's still being decided but I kind of liked that.
And, here's the appearance.
Frame: Human like.
Skin: Dark silvery grey, or fiery white.
Hair: Midnight black. Amber yellow. Fire red. Sea blue. Lime aquatic green. Metalic silver. Illuminescent white.
Normally long in length, shoulder length and longer.
Eyes: Maroon red. Ruby red. Golden yellow. Amber. Aquamarine. Teal. Lime.
The whole iris is slitted vertically. Pupil is small.
Ears: Thin/ flat against their heads.
Teeth: Silver and sharp, thinner then a humans and more like razor blades.
Nails: Sharp enough to slice through skin like butter.
Other: Horns matching the color of their skin. Thin. Start out fuzzy but becomes firmer as they grow older. How they grow and curve depends on their bloodline. Some stick straight up, while some curl downwards in a tight spiral. It varys.
A thick, muscular prehensile tail. Gets thinner as it goes out to the tip.
Markings: Have ancient tribal markings. As they grow older the patterns change with age.
Have a mottled skin tone. The patterns are made by the blood of the parents. All are similar to their bloodlines.
Humans turned into vahlbrien do not have markings. They have a branded symbol on their upper arm.
((Their markings vary as well. Representing what familys they are apart of. How high up on the scale they are.))
Their appearances vary like us humans. No two look exactly the same, unless of course identical twins.
I was thinking that their internal structure was different too, but I wasn't sure what. I was thinking maybe they have the solid layer of tissue or bone on the front of their body, like how the Reapers in the one Blade movie had.
Here's more on the world if you want. The world is similar to that of Sheogorath's mania and dementia, from the elder scrolls game Oblivion. The eternal dark and twistedness of dementia, and the vived, colorfulness of mania. Also is somewhat similar to the Twilight Realm in the LoZ game, Twilight Princess. If you know either that is. The worlds not advanced like ours, but it's not completly medieval either. It has palaces, machinary and it's own forms of technology. Goes by a caste system too.
So, what do you think? Anything you think that I should change or add? Use instead?
Anything you have to say about it can help.
Thanks :}