What do you think of this song that I compose?

Leyla

New member
I love writing song. I want people here to judge me whether I'm good at it.
If you say you don't like it, is alright because next time I can write better songs.
TELL ME THE TRUTH, PLX! I love singing, writing songs and wish to learn to play instruments.
Also I have written more songs. I just want to show if this song is a great song.
Thanks, for commenting. Plx if you say no explain why and if you do like it explain why.
Thanks again! By the way, I'm just 13 years old x)


Ahh, I took a quick stare
They say I was not allow
But I found pieces
It belonged to a puzzle
Connected, that's how I startle
It was settling me to places

It's a strange perspective
Everything is falling into its place
Time passes by but it's a worth moment
Quarrelling over a small portion it's not worth it
Looking at it clear, makes you want to know more
The case is getting near but not the end yet
Disguising yourself is foolishness
It's a strange perspective

Acquiring the less amount you see
Just acknowledge the truth
But converting everything into papers
Lights wanting to exposure you
Make a run, huh?
Babe, you aren't running from your trouble

It's a strange perspective
Everything is falling into its place
Time passes by but it's a worth moment
Quarrelling over a small portion it's not worth it
Looking at it clear, makes you want to know more
The case is getting near but not the end yet
Disguising yourself is foolishness
It's a strange perspective

It's too late to escape
Make a run or not
It's a case close down
You'd never imagine it
You are incredible busted

It's a strange perspective
Everything is falling into its place
Time passes by but it's a worth moment
Quarrelling over a small portion it's not worth it
Looking at it clear, makes you want to know more
The case is getting near but not the end yet
Disguising yourself is foolishness
It's a strange perspective
 
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