what do you think of this song I wrote?

angel..x

New member
Im 14 15 in 2 months.
I'll never let you go
verse:
Falling for you was easy
The first look got me crazy
love always seemed so hazy
my heart turned cold, was going crazy

pre chorus:
Before you entered my world
everything seemed so wrong
I didn't know what was left to do
My life seemed so blue, without you

chorus:
And i'll never let you go
The thought makes my heart skip a beat or two
cause your everything that i need
without you my life will once again be blue
and those little things you do
make me lucky to have you

Verse:
It must have been the magic in your words
That didn't let me think of the cons
All i can think of are positives
I never come across any negatives

chorus x1

bridge:
Yes it must have been the magic in your words
cause now they've got me hypnotized
At first i was terrified
But now I've realized it loves

tell me what you think
and if there are any lines you would change let me know!

thanks
 
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