What do you think of this short free verse poem I wrote?

joshmcnulty86

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Stoned
In the overthrows
With cruelties
Arising from

The open spades
And evil leers
Dejections
Madly and horrific

In the eyes
Of the
Worldly mass
Detuned space

Two suns
At bay
In the stones
They throw

Birthed
To the rustic
Tragedies, majestic
Smooth bodied ills

Solidified sunrises
On the cool
Drop out
Mountains

So what do you think
 
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