What do you think of this poetry. Please be truthful but nice!?

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Watch them laugh
and watch them play
As if nothing ever happened
Until today.

Yet, they're poison to each other
And now to a young one
Bringing hurt to all that's helped or even tried
And it's my son.


I tried to help
I hurt myself the most
I watched near death and prayed that God
Would help them both.

Now here I am
Watching once again
I just don't think I can handle anymore
Would it be so bad for me to close this door?



I just proved something to myself! I have actually written some decent poetry in the past. However, this is too close to me right now, and I should NEVER just sit down and write it on Answers before writing it somewhere else. Ha!
 
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