What do you think of this poem?

[tom_1635]

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Intellectually outspoken
Metaphysically confused
Circular logically induced
Meditatively virginal
Rationally confused
Thought provoking
Life’s wonders undertaken
I have just described what I have forsaken

 

[gnomus12]

Eh...it's alright. Better to give us the title so that we kind of have an idea before reading it...it forces us to go back and re-read it after reading the last line

 

[Dinosaur]

its to hard to read
to many big words
a good poem should read smoothly
ive written many poems and i like the idea your going with
but it needs to be simplified
sometimes its ok to use big words but they need to flow with everything else

hope ive helped
good to see someone into writting poems

 

[Tony H]

Pretentious rubbish. You are joking, aren't you?

 

[Milwaukees Best]

i completely agree with the wrestler ahead of me. that shit was whack

 

[The original housekeeper]

yo man that shit is gay. stop writing this crap. i think i just got stupider by reading it. man. F U C K I N G gay