What do you think of this poem?

Julia

New member
I'm new
I'm improved
I can do anything without you
I can breathe
And I can dance
And I'm willing to take a chance
I can fly
Without my lead balloon
You've got no power to make me swoon
I am strong
And I will fight
And to be honest, I'm more than alright
So move along
And torture somebody else
Our poem is over.

I'm not sure about the last line, and I don't know about the three line phrase malarky :\ Any feedback appreciated :)
 
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