what do you think of this poem?

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you can be fairly honest...and suggestions or changing words around are helpful, if you have any.
its is short, and when i read it i put a pause in between the first few sentences.
so yeah, here goes....


Why is it one can love so blindly
Going to lengths of great measure for the other
Inventing excuses for their errs
Neglecting the cautions the heart wills to send.

Why is it one can love so blindly?
All the while knowing, it will fall apart in the end.

(or just Knowing it will..)
 
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