what do you think of this poem?

[Adam Lambert Luvr]

I love writing poems... what do you think of this one?

How far away?
I need my mommy today
is it a mile
a city
a state
a country away?
how about across the ocean?
On the other side of the ocean?
I need my mommy to hurry home today
how far is heaven by the way?
oops on the second ocean i meant world