What do you think of this poem?

[BlackandBootiful]

Nobody ever told me I found out for myself:
You got to believe in foolish miracles.
It’s not how you play the game;
it’s if you win or lose;
you can’t choose;
don’t confuse…
It's up to you!

Give me your thoughts.

 

[Natasha's Ghost]

None of it makes any sense. You are even completely contradictory from one line to the next, so it doesn't flow at all, either in the sound or in meaning.

 

[stevie-g]

very basic; sounds very infantile

 

[Zach]

I agree with the above, but you're totally off. It's not about if you win or lose at all. It is all about how you played.

I suppose it's a matter of perspective. Yours is a painful one.