what do you think of the poem i wrote? i already know that it doesnt need to have all of the commas and also the letter arent supposed to be capitalized, but the word program does it automatically. any opinions and criticism are welcome! thanks in advance! 
I’m walking around in circles
Not sure which direction to go
My life is changing by the second,
So how am I supposed to know?
I try to fit myself in there
But I’m always put back out
I never find what’s right for me,
And I’m beginning to have doubts
You let me go without a look back,
Starting your life over again,
But I’ve taken too many chances now
So when am I ever going to win?
I want to make sure I use my voice
To bring peace and love,
But how am I to do any of this,
When I’m not getting help from above?
But I don’t know what I want to do,
Where I want to spend the rest of my time,
But it’s speeding ahead too fast for me,
And the responsibility is all mine.
Should I stay in the place
That I’ve always known,
Or go where I want
To be left alone?
I don’t know why this world,
Expects so much of me
It all looks simple, watching from afar,
But up close I can now see,
I’m now alone with no one else,
Who understands what I’m going through.
Where is my place in this world,
If I can’t make it back to you?
I’m walking around in circles
Not sure which direction to go
My life is changing by the second,
So how am I supposed to know?
I try to fit myself in there
But I’m always put back out
I never find what’s right for me,
And I’m beginning to have doubts
You let me go without a look back,
Starting your life over again,
But I’ve taken too many chances now
So when am I ever going to win?
I want to make sure I use my voice
To bring peace and love,
But how am I to do any of this,
When I’m not getting help from above?
But I don’t know what I want to do,
Where I want to spend the rest of my time,
But it’s speeding ahead too fast for me,
And the responsibility is all mine.
Should I stay in the place
That I’ve always known,
Or go where I want
To be left alone?
I don’t know why this world,
Expects so much of me
It all looks simple, watching from afar,
But up close I can now see,
I’m now alone with no one else,
Who understands what I’m going through.
Where is my place in this world,
If I can’t make it back to you?