What do you think of this poem?

[Stimpy]

Voices

Those voices,
So peaceful,
Yet lonesome,
They linger,
With no guiding light,
Come back,
I must have you here,
Heaven sent angels,
Keep me company,
Your soft voices,
Comfort my lost soul,
Fix me,
Stay here,
I can move on with you around,
I walk down these barren empty roads alone,
Searching for you,
Those voices,
I hear them again,
Don't leave,
Please....
Can it be better??

 

[sportschik1103]

if you add words that add a little more rythmatic it would be more perfect other than that i personally loveit

 

[kool-gurl]

i think the rhythm is great already. its really good. i liked it.

 

[........help...]

I like it very much .Its sometimes best for a person to just keep their regular poem its always that best.