What do you think of this poem?

Do you think it's too much like a statement? What do you think of it?

"Life is not Living"

Life begins from life itself,
Life is a place,
And there is a road to provide direction

As time persists,
Ears will be deceitful
And a plethora of ideas will fill an undeveloped mind
Soon, these individual thoughts will join
And some will shatter

A person will break free from the stranger within them
It is only then, that they begin living
 
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