Nathan Drake
New member
Look, I'm 15, Im troubled, I write when I'm tired, and Its 1.45am haha! This took me no longer than 15mins, so its not perfect, Im not a poet, I can't see the flaws as well as you might, but please judge on the story / content, rather than grammar etc
here goes!
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Your one I'n a million. Truly.
The brightest star In the dark sky,
I dreamt that someday we just get up,
Hold hands, and go. Fly.
But now I see, it'll never happen.
For you I want to do the best I can,
But I cannot please you now,
For I am not a man.
You deserve the man,
Who'll love and treat you as you should,
I'm afraid I can't give you that,
But by God I wish I could.
You've*Actually helped me so much,*
You don't even know!
But how could I possibly explain,
When I can barely say 'Hello.'
I wanted things to work out,
So I tried and tried.
I didn't do enough, so today,
I knew things had died...
When I happened to look at you,
And saw you elegantly smile,
You were so beautiful that I'll admit,
My heart stopped for a while,
So that was when, I knew,
I'd met my greatest fear,
I had to stop bothering you,
So you'd smile again my dear,
If I leave you alone,
Itd cause me so much pain,
But if it makes you happily smile,
It will not be I'n vain.
You deserve the very best,*
And that is what I wish you,
And Im so so sorry*That I couldn't Make your wishes come true.
here goes!
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Your one I'n a million. Truly.
The brightest star In the dark sky,
I dreamt that someday we just get up,
Hold hands, and go. Fly.
But now I see, it'll never happen.
For you I want to do the best I can,
But I cannot please you now,
For I am not a man.
You deserve the man,
Who'll love and treat you as you should,
I'm afraid I can't give you that,
But by God I wish I could.
You've*Actually helped me so much,*
You don't even know!
But how could I possibly explain,
When I can barely say 'Hello.'
I wanted things to work out,
So I tried and tried.
I didn't do enough, so today,
I knew things had died...
When I happened to look at you,
And saw you elegantly smile,
You were so beautiful that I'll admit,
My heart stopped for a while,
So that was when, I knew,
I'd met my greatest fear,
I had to stop bothering you,
So you'd smile again my dear,
If I leave you alone,
Itd cause me so much pain,
But if it makes you happily smile,
It will not be I'n vain.
You deserve the very best,*
And that is what I wish you,
And Im so so sorry*That I couldn't Make your wishes come true.