What do you think of this poem?

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I've never really written the kind that doesn't rhyme, so could you guys give me some feedback as to how this one turned out?



She’s got friends
A good family
People who really care
Yet she feels so alone
Trapped in this thing called life
Wanting out
What’s wrong?
Why does she feel the way she does?
She should be happy
But she’s not
Inside she’s crying
Screaming for someone to please help
They can’t see why she does this
Why she feels the way she does
And neither can she
What will it take for her to be happy?
She’s got everything she needs right here
Yet she feels lost
Alone and helpless
As if it’s her against the world
As if she’s a tiny ant trying not to be stepped on
By someone’s giant shoe
Like nothing is going right
And she will always fail
What will it take for her to see
That she is not alone?
What will it take for her to see
That people really care?
She’ll never see
In her mind she’s hated
She’ll always feel alone
What else does she need?
She doesn’t even know
What makes her feel so low
 
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