Lazy Eight (∞)
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I saw this poem in a poetry book at Barnes & Noble bookstore.
It sounds very nice. What do you think of this poem ?
Title: Precious Time
Author: Unknown
My soul can't last, but though wish upon to see you.
Take me to a place at which there is much need.
As I smell beauty in the air,
upon hearing a rose in a stream.
Like a spirit out of no where,
I gently picked the rose.
Nothing ever so beautiful had happened
until I held it softly in my hand.
Emotions dripped from me like a leaky faucet,
nothing left, but a puddle of water.
As I looked into it, a reflection came
out of no where.
Even more beautiful than a rose,
at one glance could it be, yes,
I saw you, so beautiful.
With an emotional spirit I gave the rose to you.
As the day grew on, I thought how lucky I was
to find both the rose and you at one precious time.
It sounds very nice. What do you think of this poem ?
Title: Precious Time
Author: Unknown
My soul can't last, but though wish upon to see you.
Take me to a place at which there is much need.
As I smell beauty in the air,
upon hearing a rose in a stream.
Like a spirit out of no where,
I gently picked the rose.
Nothing ever so beautiful had happened
until I held it softly in my hand.
Emotions dripped from me like a leaky faucet,
nothing left, but a puddle of water.
As I looked into it, a reflection came
out of no where.
Even more beautiful than a rose,
at one glance could it be, yes,
I saw you, so beautiful.
With an emotional spirit I gave the rose to you.
As the day grew on, I thought how lucky I was
to find both the rose and you at one precious time.