What do you think of this poem?(Ramadan)?

[Salma's Cousin]

I don't know what to say really.

But I think I had enough of envy.

I don't have much to say about you.

And you shouldn't have nothing bad to say about me.

Envy in your heart.

Turns a beautiful road dark.

I contemplated in the park.

Trying to think of a new start.

Life had me under pressure.

Until I accepted my card.

I wonder why these young boys keep trying to look so hard.

Man, life is too short.

Better play your Ps and Qs.

Put them beads in your hand.

Then pay Allah his dues.

I raise my hands to The One.

Satans got me on the run.

Oh, just what we do for fun.

Shouldn't have did it, but its done.

The End

 

[Egypt]

@abu Khalid
PLEASE!! OK! We do not have to be extreme and always look to judge things as haram or not. He likes to write poems, its simple! Why are we always trying to make things difficult!!!