What do you think of this poem or rap or whatever I wrote?

Joe Smith

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They ask me if I’m okay, they ask me why I’m grieving
Life is a puzzle, and I can’t find the missing pieces
But even though I know, I don’t ever let them see it
Because as strong as I am, I can never show a weakness
Especially when you are the piece that’s missing
I want you so bad; I just don’t want to believe it
And I feel we are losing touch, losing all connection
I don’t know if it’s you, or the man in my reflection
I feel like there is so much love for you I forgot to mention
I’m sorry if I was aggressive, it’s just my reaction to my affection
And I will admit, I do still struggle with self-confidence issues
Especially when we haven’t talked and I miss you
I fear that you won’t call back, or even say a word to me
Because everyone I have loved before has always hurt me
You tell me about guys that have told you that they want more time
But trust me; there is no way their feelings could match mine
It’s crazy how you take in all the dark ideas, and make them shine
You are the only girl, I can even think about when love comes to mind
You see me as a best friend and a brother, and nothing more
And I will be fine keeping it that way as long as you don’t walk out the door
I just want you to be happy; you are the only one who actually deserves it
I don’t disapprove of other men because I’m jealous, it’s because he’s not perfect
I always knew you would never like me, it just hurt when I heard it
But I’ll do everything for you, as long as a smiles on your face, it was worth it
 
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