What do you think of this poem of my long lost love?

Soo, I just wrote this poem, I was thinking the whole time about a boy I loved when I was 13 (a year ago) and things ended badly right before he moved to New York. :/
Thoughts???

Upper-West Fair
Are you going to the Upper-West fair?
Broken hearts never heal with time
Remember me to the boy who hides there
He was once a young lustful lover of mine
Tell him I’ve forgiven all of his words
Broken hearts never heal with time
Beg him to forgive everything I said
I haven’t stopped loving him all this time
Tell him to find it in his heart his love for me
Broken hearts never heal with time
I know that his longing for me is there
Then he’ll know to be a lifelong love of mine
Are you going to the Upper-West fair?
Broken hearts don’t heal with time
Remember me to the boy who shines there
He once was carved into this heart of mine
aww, No Homo came to answer my question. What did ya miss me?
 
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