ok i posted this same question earlier and got a critique that got me thinking so heres the new and improved version.this poem was inspired by the Tanabata (七夕, tanabata?, meaning "Evening of the seventh") is a JapaneseChinese star festival, Qi Xi (七夕 "The Night of Sevens")． star festival, derived from the
It celebrates the meeting of Orihime (Vega) and Hikoboshi (Altair). The Milky Way, a river made from stars that crosses the sky, separates these lovers, and they are allowed to meet only once a year on the seventh day of the seventh lunar month of the lunisolar calendar. Since the stars come out at night, the celebration is held at night.
hope you enjoy. and please give me ur true oppinion
She loves him
and he loves her
Their love so united
so pure
Their wait for each other so long
They could hardly bare
year after year
They call out to the stars
for the year to end
and for July to come again
They call out their lover's name
just to hear silence again
a night never goes by
without a tear leaving their eyes
The milky way, so so cruel to them
but finally July is here
The milky way gone
they can finally hug each other
kiss each other
embrace one another
for that one night long
wishing it will last forever
Their love so strong
it can never be wrong
It celebrates the meeting of Orihime (Vega) and Hikoboshi (Altair). The Milky Way, a river made from stars that crosses the sky, separates these lovers, and they are allowed to meet only once a year on the seventh day of the seventh lunar month of the lunisolar calendar. Since the stars come out at night, the celebration is held at night.
hope you enjoy. and please give me ur true oppinion
She loves him
and he loves her
Their love so united
so pure
Their wait for each other so long
They could hardly bare
year after year
They call out to the stars
for the year to end
and for July to come again
They call out their lover's name
just to hear silence again
a night never goes by
without a tear leaving their eyes
The milky way, so so cruel to them
but finally July is here
The milky way gone
they can finally hug each other
kiss each other
embrace one another
for that one night long
wishing it will last forever
Their love so strong
it can never be wrong