what do you think of this poem ( it was a dare to write like this)?

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Let me go for the last joy ride
Deep into the shadows of suicide
To release the pain I have
To hide from my mistakes


Let me in
Let me in
The box I call home
Hurry up and start to burry me
Free me from myself
Through the smiles of others
I must not live
I must no live

Let me go for the last joy ride
Deep into the shadows of suicide
To release the pain I have
To hide from my mistakes

Why all the suffer
Why all the tears
This is my finest year
So lets go
For my last joy ride

Let me go for the last joy ride
Deep into the shadows of suicide
To release the pain I have
To hide from my mistakes
 
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