what do you think of this poem i wrote?

James

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What’s to expect in a world of lies, mountains change the shape of skies
In my eyes I see no discise, your only as real as AHHHHHH
Lets paint the pain that paints on us, lets paint it red with blood
I see you hiding in the shadows, telling me the lies
The lies that want me to die!!!!!!!

ILL FUCKING SHOW YOU THE WAY, THE WAY TO THE RIVER IN WHICH YOU HAVE CREATED.
You never wanted me to believe, you only wanted me to see
WHAT THE WORST OF ME COULD BEEEEEEE

This time I want to die
But time remains so solid, the cold winds of loneliness bush across my skin
And I hurt, I’m bleeding these words you could never hear
The sorrow continues, the voices still tell me to go die
Your better off dead then alive

I feel so trapped and left to die, forgotten like a lonely deny
From the world I feel rejected, to the point where I cant be corrected ANY MOREEE…
 
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