What do you think of this poem i wrote?

[mikeridesabike]

Looking Back-

If ever I should recall these days,
When I was young and full of life,
I pray it brings a smile to my face,
And keeps me content with my wife.

 

[um no]

im sorry but its really not that good
keep trying

 

[john l]

what is that a poem? ;D

 

[LOZ]

is it supposed to be funny? coz i giggled.. lol nice work man, short but subtle!