What Do you Think of This Poem I Wrote?

Saving Us

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Lucid Controversy

Contemplating the joys of symphonies
I throw my melodies
At the passing soldier
Where have you gone?
I was being fed and tortured
Feeling thus i didn't belong

The way the notes were sliding
I couldn't let them take the hand
I tried to hold back the harmony
But the music slowly took end
Diverging onto a different plan

As he pulled me closer
He whispered in my ear:
You were, are and forever more be
A lonely survivor begging to be seen
Just any other fighter who wished,dreamed
And couldn't tell beauty, from the chair of the queen
 
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