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This is about gangs btw
"The streets at night,
the ones you walk alone,
hold written memories,
that stain walls,
and your mind.
Youve changed your mind about this you say?
If you tell,
you oay the ultimate price,
Rest in peace,
The life you threw away."
Please be nice but honest. Im horrible at writing poems. How can I make this better?? Thanks for the critisism
Its helpful!
Fix: You PAY the ultimate price.
"The streets at night,
the ones you walk alone,
hold written memories,
that stain walls,
and your mind.
Youve changed your mind about this you say?
If you tell,
you oay the ultimate price,
Rest in peace,
The life you threw away."
Please be nice but honest. Im horrible at writing poems. How can I make this better?? Thanks for the critisism
Its helpful!Fix: You PAY the ultimate price.