what do you think of this poem "eyes?"?

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well....I wrote it....it sort of like a lyrical type of poem (feel free to add on to it, )

As love songs played on the radio stations
I found it hard to remain patient
all my stories were ancient

got lost with out a woman's love like Mr. brown knew I would
with these familiar toons with familiar words I never understood

to me eyes were just organs, just part of anatomy
they kept talking 'bout them, they kept annoying me
"her eyes, his eyes, our eyes" "real eyes realize real lies"
mean while I denied the truth like an old man senile
that is...until her eyes saw mine

because when mine met hers
the place my heart moved to...from where it was
couldn't measured in kilometers
deep as the center of the ocean
wide as the widest rivers
casting never before seen emotions
felt the guilt of a thousand sinners
undeserving like a fluke winner
looked at the man in the mirror
and thought if i didn't play games, i couldn't win her

star like eyes, so radiant
spot light's mine, just aint ready yet
making me lose touch with the world feeling like an alien
shes got me hypnotized, good bye reality i won't be back again
 
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