WHAT do you think of this poem "Bleeding"?

U

Uninvited Soul

New member
Bleeding..
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Scattered.. Splattered
Yet still beating
Yet still bleeding
I'm bleeding.. With every pulse
Represents a memory..
..My Misery

I'm calling.. yelling
For my own death
To drink from it's chalice
And feel.. The last drops on my lips
..Sweet bitterness

I'm calling..But i get
No echoes in return
Nothing to down the burn
My mind..keeps on breaking
And i just stared..waiting..
Bleeding..
I'll always be bleeding
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(C)UninvitedSoul

PS: I'm not a native English speaker , so don't be that cruel.
You can also read it on my wordpress blog, same user name...
 
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