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Cameron

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Sleepless dreams fall over my eyes,

Like egg shells falling to the hard tile,

Exploding into a fantastic show of horror.



I walk an empty trail to no place known,

S new land that has yet to be seen,

Running wild like a newly freed stallion.



A lone tree stands triumphantly,

Swaying its brilliant leaves in the light breeze,

Welcoming its new guests in the forbidden land.



A man in the distances rests,

Places his hat atop his face,

Eyelids fall and he begins his much needed rest.



Children's laughter in the distance places a vaguersmile on my face,

and at last the peace enters my bBodynd I am with the ones I love for an eternity,

My dreams have come true.
 
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