What do you think of this limerick?

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Tell me what you think about my limerick poem about Limerick, Ireland...

there once was a lass from miami
who wished she could fly from tamiami
she went off to limerick
afraid to be homesick
turns out she really misses her mammy
tamiami is an airport in miami, fl....
miami is where i have always lived...
limerick is the city in ireland i plan on moving to.....

i followed every grammatical rule for writing a limerick, please only answer if you have experience in reading/writing limerick poetry.
 
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