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Ok, so there's 2 ideas ive been working on. JUST REMEMBER, IM 12!
1). A man, living with his daughter on the edge of a country near a cliff, has just lost his wife who committed suicide. she suffered from depression, so there was nothing he could have done to save her, but he blames himself immensely. he becomes more attached to his home and doesn't want to let his daughter out of his sight out of fear that he will lose her too. sitting on the bench outside his house where he sits everyday, which is about 2 metres away from the cliff, he hears footsteps approach him. when he looks up, he sees another woman ready to jump off the cliff. he stops her, and begins to do the same with other suicidal people, by using his wife as a role model. however, after months, he realises that it is not enough and that he cannot be without her, and he jumps off the cliff.
Too dramatic? i don't know..
2). A 17 year old girl named madison is diagnosed with cancer, and is unresponsive to treatments. the doctors decide that there is no way for her to be saved, and ultimately tell her that she has 6 months to live. terrified, she desperately tries to continue her life, but is unknowingly pushing people out her life. a boy named derek moves in across the street, also 17, and continuously tries to get into her life, but she forces him away. however, she comes to trust him in time, and they begin to fall in love. she holds back to tell him about her cancer. while in class one day, a month before she is due to die, her cancer causes her to stop breathing and faint, her head bleeding and her condition fatal. derek rushes to her side, immediately crying, but when the ambulance arrives he is not allowed to come with her. frantic, he breaks out of the school after what seems like forever, and runs to the hospital to be with her. when told about her condition, he is furious at her for not telling him, and doesn't come to see her in her bed from that point. however, after hearing that she was given a life sentence, he realises how cruel he had been, and rushes to the hospital to find that she had began to bleed in her stomach for an unknown cause and fallen unconscious, in a critical condition. the doctors rush to see her, but come out certain that she is going to die, and instruct him to say his goodbyes, as they would no longer try to save her. he runs in, only to burst out in tears. while hes at his side, she wakes up, but derek tells no one about it, because he knows she is weak enough to die. she confesses "i stabbed myself derek. i knew that you were mad at me and i couldn't live without you." in shock, he does everything to convince her that he no longer feels that way. she grows weaker and weaker, and before shutting her eyes, she says "i love you." as her final words...
ok, so on number 2 im not sure weather or not she should survive, so opinions?
1). A man, living with his daughter on the edge of a country near a cliff, has just lost his wife who committed suicide. she suffered from depression, so there was nothing he could have done to save her, but he blames himself immensely. he becomes more attached to his home and doesn't want to let his daughter out of his sight out of fear that he will lose her too. sitting on the bench outside his house where he sits everyday, which is about 2 metres away from the cliff, he hears footsteps approach him. when he looks up, he sees another woman ready to jump off the cliff. he stops her, and begins to do the same with other suicidal people, by using his wife as a role model. however, after months, he realises that it is not enough and that he cannot be without her, and he jumps off the cliff.
Too dramatic? i don't know..
2). A 17 year old girl named madison is diagnosed with cancer, and is unresponsive to treatments. the doctors decide that there is no way for her to be saved, and ultimately tell her that she has 6 months to live. terrified, she desperately tries to continue her life, but is unknowingly pushing people out her life. a boy named derek moves in across the street, also 17, and continuously tries to get into her life, but she forces him away. however, she comes to trust him in time, and they begin to fall in love. she holds back to tell him about her cancer. while in class one day, a month before she is due to die, her cancer causes her to stop breathing and faint, her head bleeding and her condition fatal. derek rushes to her side, immediately crying, but when the ambulance arrives he is not allowed to come with her. frantic, he breaks out of the school after what seems like forever, and runs to the hospital to be with her. when told about her condition, he is furious at her for not telling him, and doesn't come to see her in her bed from that point. however, after hearing that she was given a life sentence, he realises how cruel he had been, and rushes to the hospital to find that she had began to bleed in her stomach for an unknown cause and fallen unconscious, in a critical condition. the doctors rush to see her, but come out certain that she is going to die, and instruct him to say his goodbyes, as they would no longer try to save her. he runs in, only to burst out in tears. while hes at his side, she wakes up, but derek tells no one about it, because he knows she is weak enough to die. she confesses "i stabbed myself derek. i knew that you were mad at me and i couldn't live without you." in shock, he does everything to convince her that he no longer feels that way. she grows weaker and weaker, and before shutting her eyes, she says "i love you." as her final words...
ok, so on number 2 im not sure weather or not she should survive, so opinions?