What do you think of this i wrote it myself?

[Daniel]

When you went away,
I didn't know what do do,
all the things i could say,
are that i love you.

Chorus
Coz, i need you baby
I need you in my life,
There's no no or maby,
you cut me out like a knife.

You walked out the door,
and left me alone
in the dark,
in the cold,
with no-one to hold.

Chous

when im with you,
I feel sky high
i just wanna spread my wings
and fly, just fly


chorus

but now you have come back to me,
it is just not meant to be,
I still have the hole in my heart,
that i thought you had made.

chorus 2
but now i don't need you baby,
i don't want you in my life,
you gave me no and maby's
you cut me like a knife.

thankyou

btw this is a ballad kind of song

 

[Nik]

ok make sure you don't publish it again because people will steal lyrics from you
And:
'maby' is spelt 'maybe'

 

[katydint]

I like it, I think it's good and that you should keep on writing.
Just keep writing, throw it all into a box or drawer until later when you need it (for publishing!).