What do you think of this free verse poem I wrote?

joshmcnulty86

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So I'm not sure if this poem is quite finished or not yet I figured I'd post it on here to see what other people think of it.

Untitled as of yet

Men in shambles
With their eyes
In speechless
Voids

I see them
With disgust
In pity
On authorities

Paper mâchés
Into broken sunlight
They are
Harrowed and useless

Specks on
Glacial fronts
Dead and hungry
I am tired, ill, and delusional

In the desert
Moonlit suns
Camped in the
Sufficiency of humanity

I look at them
In the overt blows
To the major establishments
Seething in foam and blood

Reddening eyes
I count them off
Grazing fields
Count me wild, one of the disorder
 
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