What do you think of this book/short story series idea?

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It's begins with an orphan boy, all he wants is to find his parents/family. Somehow he turns out to be a son of angels! And he accidentally finds his way to this place kinda like heaven, not really heaven but close. Where all the souls who don't go to heaven or hell go because there's something unsure about them and that's where he meets the strange souls. What I mean by unsure is that, I remember reading somewhere that "God will let you enter his palace when your ready" and these souls aren't ready and they can't force themselves to be ready because something is unsure. Anyway, this is gonna be pretty long cause I want him to bring a fat, witty sidekick who doesn't make it to the souls place since it's not his place to be. Anyway, I'm still thinking about it and I want to know what you like and don't like about it.
 
honestly? it's lacking spirit. when you write you can't just throw down something and call it art it has to have a meaning to the read but most importantly to you.
 
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