It all started with a glance. A glance from a stranger that Adorlee caught one Autumn afternoon, it was the only glance she received from him, though she could not be certain of that. Perhaps, his glances washed over her more than once while she wasn’t paying attention, distracted by the beauty of the Autumn colours, it’s smells and sounds. But one thing that she did not know was that this single glance was a beginning of the healing and destruction of her life.
Adorlee meets Garrett once, twice, thrice. None of the times do they speak to each other, they simply watch each other be. Both have problems and storms in their emotions that are different yet almost the same. Adorlee ran away from home and her abusive father, Garrett lost his only daughter, that was abandoned by his wife. Their worlds are shattered but once they come together only they have the power to restore what‘s the peace.
"it's smells and sounds" is of course supposed to be "its" cant believe i havent noticed that at first.
The one I posted above had mistakes here's another one:
It all started with a glance. A glance from a stranger that Adorlee caught one Autumn afternoon, it was the only glance she received from him, though she could not be certain of that. Perhaps, his glances washed over her more than once while she wasn’t paying attention, distracted by the beauty of the Autumn colours, its smells and sounds. But one thing that she did not know was that this single glance was a beginning of the healing and destruction of her life.
Adorlee meets Garrett once, twice, thrice. None of the times do they speak to each other, they simply watch each other be. Both have problems and storms in their emotions that are different yet almost the same. Adorlee ran away from home and her abusive father, Garrett lost his only daughter, that was abandoned by his wife. Their worlds are shattered but once they come together only they have the power to restore the peace.
Adorlee meets Garrett once, twice, thrice. None of the times do they speak to each other, they simply watch each other be. Both have problems and storms in their emotions that are different yet almost the same. Adorlee ran away from home and her abusive father, Garrett lost his only daughter, that was abandoned by his wife. Their worlds are shattered but once they come together only they have the power to restore what‘s the peace.
"it's smells and sounds" is of course supposed to be "its" cant believe i havent noticed that at first.
The one I posted above had mistakes here's another one:
It all started with a glance. A glance from a stranger that Adorlee caught one Autumn afternoon, it was the only glance she received from him, though she could not be certain of that. Perhaps, his glances washed over her more than once while she wasn’t paying attention, distracted by the beauty of the Autumn colours, its smells and sounds. But one thing that she did not know was that this single glance was a beginning of the healing and destruction of her life.
Adorlee meets Garrett once, twice, thrice. None of the times do they speak to each other, they simply watch each other be. Both have problems and storms in their emotions that are different yet almost the same. Adorlee ran away from home and her abusive father, Garrett lost his only daughter, that was abandoned by his wife. Their worlds are shattered but once they come together only they have the power to restore the peace.