What do you think of these lyrics?

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I wrote these lyrics, it's kind of a Taylor-Swift-style country-pop kind of thing, if you get it. What do you think? It's about what's happening to me right now, and I know it could do with some improvement but is it good or bad?

You were my best friend but I always wanted more than that
Got what I wanted, but it turned out bad
And then we didn’t speak, didn’t talk ‘till 3 months later
Now I realise all I want is you back

Oh, maybe I have a shot
Maybe I’m acting like a fool
But, last night you texted me
Saying that you felt, you felt the same way too

And all the memories that live inside me never faded
Not even dark and distant feelings that I once had
Now they’re all back, feeling stronger and I just can’t wait and
I can’t believe I let you go on the first time

Regrets don’t happen, what you live with, then you live with darlin’
I found that true until I thought of you the other night
But I don’t mind ‘cuz maybe I can get over them this time
Just maybe we could make them right

There’s nothing in the way
Apart from what’s to figure out
But baby, who’s to say
It’s nothing we can’t talk about

And all the memories that live inside me never faded
Not even dark and distant feelings that I once had
Now they’re all back, feeling stronger and I just can’t wait and
I can’t believe I let you go on the first time
And all the memories that live inside you never faded
Not even dark and distant feelings that you once had
Now they’re all back, feeling stronger and you just can’t wait and
You can’t believe you let it go, on the first time

I remember that fight, it was out of our hands
Thought it all was going wrong, but we didn’t understand
How wrong we had got it, and it’s taken so much time to let go
But now we both know,

That all the memories that live inside us never faded
Not even dark and distant feelings that we once had
Now they’re all back, feeling stronger, and we just can’t wait and
We can’t believe how wrong we got it on the first time

:)
 
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