with a vengeance unrivaled i come back not to fade in the black, but to parade my audacity, speak truth with tenacious veracity, lead the way with a foot so heavy, crack the pavement to let the roses grow, katrina-like ambitions no man-made levy, will withstand my new stance, my experience bought me these steel-toed boots, fruits ripened i win, i will claim victory after my delivery of my guarantees, growing impatient to make waves when so many are in need of saving I can't take it... I just wish I could be light like light speed like, so that when I look in the mirror my vision is made clearer because I see what I become, a kingdom
@Steph-Well, they're incomplete... but you should still be able to get the basic gist of what's going on. Some person has been out of the game for a bit due to a series of unfortunate events. He's looking to make change in a big way.
I'm also looking for feedback on my cadence and the general flow of the lyrics, not just the lyrics themselves, though any feedback is appreciated.
Also, the question is misleading. I'm not a rapper nor am I aspiring to be one. I'm just a writer writing trying to take time to express myself in a creative way, I'm not trying to be the next Drake.
@Steph-Well, they're incomplete... but you should still be able to get the basic gist of what's going on. Some person has been out of the game for a bit due to a series of unfortunate events. He's looking to make change in a big way.
I'm also looking for feedback on my cadence and the general flow of the lyrics, not just the lyrics themselves, though any feedback is appreciated.
Also, the question is misleading. I'm not a rapper nor am I aspiring to be one. I'm just a writer writing trying to take time to express myself in a creative way, I'm not trying to be the next Drake.