What do you think of the following story blurb? Is it just too typical?

Max Tyler

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I need a little advice before I write the story as I don't want to waste my time. I did some research, but I'm still uncertain because there may have been one or two novels that escaped my mind. The blurb is bellow.

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TITLE: Fusion

PLOT: Quentin Striker is just an ordinary carpenter's son in the world of Eldenaria until he wakes up one morning to find himself in another man's body. However, he learns all too soon that he is not in a man's body but an elf's! To make matters worse, this elf has not seen the light of day for over ten thousand years due to a mortal wound that thrust him into a comma. Now he is a legend for the wound he received was from a fight against the chief archenemy of all who lived, breathed, and walked the land - Kudgle Varin, the Night Master. To his dismay, he discovers that the elves have finally found a way to wake him up since they need his help once more for zealots of the Archenemy have found a way to place the spirit of Kudgle Varin in the body of a dragon but still in such a way so that the dragon has the personality and thoughts of their Master, as well as his thirst for blood...

... especially that of the elf who has a hold on Quentin's mind and soul!

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Well, that's about it. There may be some romance between Quentin and an elf woman or a human woman. I have to decide what. Because any wife he may have had (the elf) died since elves don't even live for ten thousand years ... or do they? Any advice would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks a ton in advance! :-)
 
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