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“Do you think he’ll be ok?” asked Kate. Frowning she reached over she and brushed a blonde curl off the little boy’s red cheek. Squinting, he opened his puffy Clearwater blue eyes. She released a sigh and smiled at the boy, leaning down she kissed his forehead. “I think he’s going to be fine, for now at least.” William replied. Kate gave a slight nod and scooped the boy into her arms. “In the long run however, I am not convinced.” William added. He stood up and faced the shore, giving a long sigh William blocked the sun from his eyes and searched the water. “I can’t see anything…except debris.” Kate nodded again.
William put his arm down and turned towards Kate, she shrugged slightly and gave a concerned smile, leaning her head on James she swayed the two from side to side. God she is beautiful he thought. His eyes ran over her red curly hair, it was long and silky, draped over
shoulders and ending just below the bust. His eyes moved down to her lips, a perfect rose color red, perfect shape, and just outright perfect. Her mouth was slightly open; she breathed in and closed it. Unthinking he looked up into her big eyes, without a doubt the most beautiful blue he had ever seen. The sparkling ocean and the clearest of clear skies must envy a blue so fine. He blinked and realized she was staring back at him. His expression remained unchanged, he wasn’t done yet. William could feel his heart was racing, he moved his eyes toward her bust. He could see the outlines of her under garments’ through the wet white dress, his groin tightened. He swallowed and looked back into her eyes. The swaying had stopped and was her gaze was still on him. Feeling himself blush his eyes darted to the side for a moment settling on the forest brush.
William looked back up at Kate. She had begun to sway again.
The situation was wretched and unfortunate; he couldn’t begin to imagine how they were going to survive, and more importantly how they would get back to civilization. A thought crossed his mind and he grinned to himself. In a bright sense of things, if it is even possible that there could be one in a situation so terrible…at least being ship wrecked means Kate’s marriage will be delayed. He felt his chest pounding again. The two would be forced to spend every day with each other, for god only knows how long. Oh! So tragic! He was still staring at her, uneasy Kate shifted and softly spoke, “William…” Quickly, he cleared his throat and interrupted “I suppose we should begin making a shelter.” He announced. “Yes…yes, I suppose we should.” Kate Agreed.
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“Do you think he’ll be ok?” asked Kate. Frowning she reached over she and brushed a blonde curl off the little boy’s red cheek. Squinting, he opened his puffy Clearwater blue eyes. She released a sigh and smiled at the boy, leaning down she kissed his forehead. “I think he’s going to be fine, for now at least.” William replied. Kate gave a slight nod and scooped the boy into her arms. “In the long run however, I am not convinced.” William added. He stood up and faced the shore, giving a long sigh William blocked the sun from his eyes and searched the water. “I can’t see anything…except debris.” Kate nodded again.
William put his arm down and turned towards Kate, she shrugged slightly and gave a concerned smile, leaning her head on James she swayed the two from side to side. God she is beautiful he thought. His eyes ran over her red curly hair, it was long and silky, draped over
shoulders and ending just below the bust. His eyes moved down to her lips, a perfect rose color red, perfect shape, and just outright perfect. Her mouth was slightly open; she breathed in and closed it. Unthinking he looked up into her big eyes, without a doubt the most beautiful blue he had ever seen. The sparkling ocean and the clearest of clear skies must envy a blue so fine. He blinked and realized she was staring back at him. His expression remained unchanged, he wasn’t done yet. William could feel his heart was racing, he moved his eyes toward her bust. He could see the outlines of her under garments’ through the wet white dress, his groin tightened. He swallowed and looked back into her eyes. The swaying had stopped and was her gaze was still on him. Feeling himself blush his eyes darted to the side for a moment settling on the forest brush.
William looked back up at Kate. She had begun to sway again.
The situation was wretched and unfortunate; he couldn’t begin to imagine how they were going to survive, and more importantly how they would get back to civilization. A thought crossed his mind and he grinned to himself. In a bright sense of things, if it is even possible that there could be one in a situation so terrible…at least being ship wrecked means Kate’s marriage will be delayed. He felt his chest pounding again. The two would be forced to spend every day with each other, for god only knows how long. Oh! So tragic! He was still staring at her, uneasy Kate shifted and softly spoke, “William…” Quickly, he cleared his throat and interrupted “I suppose we should begin making a shelter.” He announced. “Yes…yes, I suppose we should.” Kate Agreed.
Thank you so much reading.